Nice warm tones, but it feels lie it’s been overcompressed in the final mixdown, everything is just too forward for this style – worry about loud later, just get the mix tight and clean first. Also, it sounds like the in the chords all the notes are the same velocity, so there’s no movement or articulation there. The mid-low end is really full, which makes the mix fell muddier than it should be. Find which elemnst are causing this accumulation of freqencies here, and notch then individually to create space.