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Temple01 started the topic Temple01 – Salt Cake in the forum
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Hey all so had been doing this track a while and was getting no-where then revisited it changed up the bass lines and practically the rest followed i already had the structure of the drums in place etc.. this being a Bass House number hopefully to submit over with the last house track i did a while back your thoughts and feedback as always a help…Read More
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Hi Scott Hope you are well mate thanks for feedback too, great points i will look at maybe try something different on that snare roll and also look at that bassline too thanks for listen mate ..Tim
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Ben Hunt started the topic Ben Hunt – Midsummer in the forum
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Started this little balearic space disco thing in honor of the solstice and finally getting some nice weather in the UK – cosmic vibes at a positively horizontal 96bpm…
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Ben – I really like this track! A great cool vibe to it – progresses well – no real draggy parts. The ONLY thing I might suggest is that in about the middle of the track, change to a real spare melodic phrase with just 1 instrument (or 2 layered) as a quiet section that would build some tension and release when the main track kicks back in.…Read More
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Awqesome, thanks Todd. Yeah I think a stripped back section in the middle is a good shout, will see how it works. Cheers.
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Totally vibing along here, forgetting I’m meant to be providing feedback. I’d add some (more) pre-delay to the reverb on the new lead at 1:30. Feels washier on the front than it could. I like how the 303 lead develops at 3 mins, nice work, subtle, but with great effect. Lovely work! Really enjoyed that.
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Temple01 started the topic Temple01 – All night in the forum
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Hey all been quiet music wise and been working on other styles i had started this a while back and thought i would come back to it for a break from the other stuff haha !! still working on it i think the first half needs a bit more tension leading to the break and a bit of arrangement work here and there been playing about with a few new toys like…Read More
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Couldn’t find track.
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Miles From Earth started the topic Feedback/Critique on a WIP Lofi-type Vibe – 90BPM in the forum
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Hey everyone,
I hope all is well – looking for some feedback on this track I’m working on. It’s not quite Lofi imo, but I’m not sure what to call it, so I’d love some insight on a genre as well, for future purposes. Let me know what you…Read More
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Nice warm tones, but it feels lie it’s been overcompressed in the final mixdown, everything is just too forward for this style – worry about loud later, just get the mix tight and clean first. Also, it sounds like the in the chords all the notes are the same velocity, so there’s no movement or articulation there. The mid-low end is really fu…Read More
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Miles From Earth started the topic Still Here II & Post Traumatic (Reviews/Feedback) in the forum
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Hey everyone,
Would love some feedback on the last two tracks of mine 🎶 definitely looking for help on a genre to categorize these as for submission purposes. As of now I’ve got them down as Experimental/Downtempo.
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As that lead filters up at 22-26s it sounds like there’s some unintended clipping/distortion artifacts. Bassline is cool when it drops, lots of movement.
The pad at 130 sounds full in the low-mids, it could help with clarity if that’s notched a bit.
The snare build out of the break didn’t carry energy in the way it should, it felt like it was…Read More