some updates V2 here https://soundcloud.com/temple01/look-me-in-the-eyes-v2-0db/s-Ekm9DvGp2BH?si=2d7e29b408fd482aaaa56b643f9b0436&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Digging this Paul. Great progression in the 2nd half – the synth at 3:18 gave me Orbital vibes which is only ever a good thing. Personally I found the kcik a bit heavy in contrast to the skittery synths, but thats just a taste thing really. Great job.

Great Track i really like the story in this the way you have constructed its arrangement gives it a great flow and vibe mix wise nothing stood out to me all sounded good nice work…T

sounds great, nice movement on the bass synth. mix sounds good and the arrangement works well.

Not already Synthpop, not yet EBM. Something between and sounds relaxing. I would put it on for a long car ride to the middle of nowhere.

This is so 80s and I love it. The arrangement totally worked for me 🙂

agree with Piv on the 80’s feel to it, lush sounds, basic but effective. Don’t feel it needs any changes to the arrangement, it works as is.