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    • #10310
      Temple01
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      Hey all so had been doing this track a while and was getting no-where then revisited it changed up the bass lines and practically the rest followed i already had the structure of the drums in place etc.. this being a Bass House number hopefully to submit over with the last house track i did a while back your thoughts and feedback as always a help and appreciated thanks.T

       

    • #10314
      Ben Hunt
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      Sounds cool Tim, vocal chops are great as always, and that sped up build to the drop is fierce! I found the drums were a little sharp in the highs for my taste, felt like a few of them could be tamed, but otherwsie nothing really stood out. Solid work once again.

      • #10315
        Temple01
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        Thanks Ben will have a play about on those highs I think I used a few DNB techniques on the drums regards the mixing to experiment but maybe it’s over cooked the high end for this style thanks buddy

    • #10375
      DEHN
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      Yes man. Agree with Ben that the highs are a bit pointy, so either EQ, or try clipping them, maybe the dirty sound from a clipper can add some fatness and bring them op in the lower parts and cut more in the highs.

      Awesome track 🙂

       

    • #10378
      AFL
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      Oh that bassline is dope! I really like the groove of the beat/bassline together, super funky feel to it.

      The addition of the Reese bass is great. There is a sort of triplet hat that starts at 1 min that sort of takes me out of the groove, imo a standard “up” open hat would fit nicely and keep the driving feel of the track. Maybe the triplet could work for a short build up time before the open hat style?

      I LOVE the pad. Gives it a nice change to the vibe for a few bars.

      Lovely breakdown, with the pad and the reese. Great choice.

      Overall fantastic track man

       

      • #10382
        Temple01
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        Thanks piv doing a better mix put week on this and few improvements to the lead sound etc.. Will be up soon thanks for feedback 🙏

        • #10384
          Temple01
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          Hi John many thanks I will take a look on that hat I think I did try something on the timing but maybe it overcooked but like u say use for some variation would be cool .. new mix on its way soon thanks buddy

      • #10383
        Temple01
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        Thanks piv doing a better mix put week on this and few improvements to the lead sound etc.. Will be up soon thanks for feedback 🙏

    • #10688
      Scott – Kenada
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      The overall groove is super tight. I agree with the highs in the mix, but this is top stuff. The breakdown has great textures. SOLID!

       

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