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Temple01 – Dantes Mixture

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last updated by Temple01 3 months ago
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    • #8127
      Temple01
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      Hi guys, have been doing a lot of DnB of late i thought would change it up for a bit of a break and also apply some lessons from my DnB endeavors, this track is House music with some deep feel funk I’m nearly there think maybe a few going over to ensure the mix is right and few touches here and there your help and comments as always are appreciated thanks..T

    • #8132
      PR23
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      Solid kick, love the metallic sound on the perc at the start.

      The tom? hits sounded really wide in the mix, first heard at 0.33.

      Nothing else stood out in the mix.

      Cool movement on the bass effects, I see what you mean by taking things from drum and bass…

      Track is done really, release it into the wild, set it free!

      • #8136
        Temple01
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        Thanks Paul i not sure the sound as no to, maybe is part of the mid bass that hits here it has a slight distortion effect from therma; vst i will check it but few small edits i think its done thanks for listening in and FB m8

    • #8142
      Temple01
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      bit of update few small edits some verb on the breakdown and some arrangement on vocals not much thanks for listening in

      • #8144
        DEHN
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        Wow man great track 🙂 I’m totally with PR23, this is done.  Really like when you do this twisted style 🙂

    • #8146
      SCHEPPERZ
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      Hey Tim, great how easily you are able to switch between different genres – this track is very well done! The only thing that stood out to me, was towards the end (about the last third ; ~4:30 – 4:50 onwards) it got a smidge too repetitive. The second time listening I’ve hadn’t the same feeling again but thought, maybe just one simple sound design twist more which wasn’t heard before. Just one unique element to save for the last thirds. Apart from that it’s done – really great track Tim 👍

      • #8147
        Temple01
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        Hi Micheal Thanks yes i was kinda thinking the same it only needs something subtle but a noticeable change here for variation/ interest thanks for listening in i appreciate it

      • #8148
        Temple01
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        Thanks Piv just maybe 1 or 2 edits to go not much i think as Micheal pointed out in the last 1/4 it needs something for interest which is an easy fix

        thanks for listening its been worth while trying out a different genre and then trying to apply some lessons back

    • #8150
      Temple01
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      Hi all so following on i put some subtle bleepy/perc loops in the last part from around 4.30 when the mid bass drops out to the outro i think it works but see what you think? thanks for your help ..T

      • #8154
        DEHN
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        That helped on what we talked about last night 🙂 gave the end some more to listen to and groove along with

        • #8159
          Temple01
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          thanks Piv gonna get the 2nd track started this week

    • #8151
      SCHEPPERZ
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      Done! 🙂

      • #8152
        Temple01
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        Thanks Micheal you was defo right on that last bit

    • #8197
      Zach
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      This is super cool.  I love the warpy bass movement, not something you see in house a lot.  Definitely can hear the DNB influence in this.  It juxtaposes really nicely with the chilled out synths and textures. I don’t really have anything to add that hasn’t already been addressed.  This sounds release ready to me!

      • #8209
        Temple01
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        Hi Zach good to see you here and thank you for listen and comments hoping to get this one out soon

        cheers

        Tim

    • #9765
      AFL
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      Hi Tim,

      Loving the keys that come in during the intro.

      Nice gnarly bassline coming, great earcandy with the panning and placement

      The chopped up amen break is a nice touch.

      As this progresses it just keeps getting better, loving the vocal additions

      and that synth that starts coming in around 2:33 sits perfectly in the mix, constantly getting a bit more present.

      This is done man, everything is sitting perfectly in place and it progresses really nicely.

      I’d drop this in a set for sure.

       

      • #9823
        Temple01
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        hi John  many thanks buddy yeah hoping to get this one out soon

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