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Feedback/Critique on a WIP Lofi-type Vibe – 90BPM

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DEHN 2 months, 3 weeks ago

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- June 11, 2024 at 17:39 #10152
  
  Miles From Earth
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  Hey everyone,
  
  I hope all is well – looking for some feedback on this track I’m working on. It’s not quite Lofi imo, but I’m not sure what to call it, so I’d love some insight on a genre as well, for future purposes. Let me know what you think.
- June 12, 2024 at 05:43 #10165
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  My first thought was Lo-Fi, even before reading your text. But it could also be called chill-out.
  
  The mix sounds rather good, it feels a little crowded at around 700-800hz.
  But that’s about it I can say on the mix since the genre doesn’t scream for super clean sounds. My only complaint is perhaps its a bit short. I like this type of tracks to minimum 5 minutes.. Otherwise I’m not getting into the flow.
  
  But super cool track.
  - This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by DEHN.
  - June 12, 2024 at 18:27 #10176
    
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    Thank you for the feedback! Will keep these points in mind when I get back around to working on this one.
- June 12, 2024 at 07:48 #10167
  
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  Yeah same like Piv – theses resonances are a bit too much, especially around that long break but you could collaborate with Mr. Melvis with this sound in general. As a Techno head the kick could also have some more power (personal taste) and the ending was a bit abrupt. Cool sketch 👍
  - June 12, 2024 at 18:28 #10177
    
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    Love the feedback, thank you!
  - June 12, 2024 at 18:29 #10178
    
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    Was thinking the filter I’m largely using throughout is a bit on the high side myself.
    - June 12, 2024 at 20:28 #10179
      
      DEHN
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      Well that added to the Lo-Fi sound of it. Remember some of the things we give feedback on are also our own preferences, its hard not to.I totally get that the kick can go deeper, but with this type of sound, it could also easily go to far.
      
      Anyway my biggest problem is actually the length. But again, it is also a preference I got. I dont want to put a track on repeat, if I have to, then the track is to short hehe 🙂
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