Airyule – Leviathan (DEHN Remix)
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April 1, 2024 at 08:44 #7491
Here is another remix I began on 24 hours ago.
Trying to make a Dark Techno track in 135 bpm. All feedback are welcome since this is kind of the first real Techno track I have ever made.
The Original is this one
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April 1, 2024 at 13:20 #7495
Hey Piv i like the intro those ear candy parts are ace, nice rolling bass in at 1.27 the kick is banging here too i like the3.20 break the siren is cool to the drop, mix wise sounds great to me i like the intensity from the 3.48 drop it raises the bar well here i thought as a idea at around 4.35 area some cutoff/rez variations in the bassline to move against the candy and stab just idea tho, ahh that siren again haha i like !! nice and dark feel to this i like how the original has a sub and you have gone for a pink flamingo with the reaper on hahaha!!! nice work mate
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April 5, 2024 at 11:47 #7554
Did a little bit of restructure and mixing
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April 6, 2024 at 17:31 #7572
Ok first off your profile image for Static Corn is awesome.
Wow when that bass drops at 1:25 it is HEAVY! Nice one.
I really enjoy the perc in the intro, adds lots of nice movement to it.
Really starts to pick up momentum at 2min.
Break at 3:30 is great, nice Tom drum hit and that siren is ace. The second drop has a different feel to it than the first which is great but keeps the intensity.
Love the stripped down bit at 5:40.
Great track and lives up to the title “Leviathan “.
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April 7, 2024 at 08:12 #7578
Wow, what a fantastic ride this one is Piv 🤘 John already made the points. If there’s really anything than this short clap pattern in the intro were too loud (eg. 0:15, 0:28, 0:43). I also loved that ride – perfect. I really got goose bumps around 4:16
Awesome remix Piv!
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April 7, 2024 at 09:39 #7579
thx both, I will look into polishing things up and maybe add a few more things.
This is actually what I would call my first techno track.
And here is a secret. The brutal bass is the second bassline from the Static Corn track layered on top of Airyules rumble. So yeah those psytrance basses for techno is not a bad idea 😛
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April 7, 2024 at 11:47 #7582
Done I Think
Added a contra “melody” to the track and some other fx, and did some mixing to get it more aggressive than it was
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April 7, 2024 at 12:14 #7583
Those quadruple kicks towards the end might be 1-2 times too often for my taste 🤔 And to be super picky I would personally filter in that transition around 3 minutes a tad smoother. Listened with eyes closed and it came a bit sudden but man I love that massive low end 😁 Yep totally done ✅
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April 7, 2024 at 12:33 #7584
Well then I will try that 🙂
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April 8, 2024 at 11:22 #7607
To be super picky, I found the knock on the kick was a bit much when it first came it at 0: 29, but once coupled with the (frankly awesome) bass it works prefectly, so I’d maybe hold that back until then (0:58 ish.) Ear candy / mix / everything else is totally on point. Banging!
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April 8, 2024 at 11:28 #7608
Yeah it sounds really knock knock without anything on. Tried out different kicks, and for that brutal bass, there is not room for much kick. Will try and filter it beore the track gets going. Thx for the listen
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April 12, 2024 at 16:01 #7638
Louder and with some EQ on kick, still need to figure out what to do with the break, also added some more fx to the “melody”
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