AFL – The Three Beggars (2024 Version)
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June 2, 2024 at 17:30 #9792
Hey guys,
I made the original version of this track back in 2011 in Reason and have always wanted to redo it since getting back into Ableton a few years ago but had lost all the samples and original project file.
I finally sat down and re-recorded the movies (Antichrist) audio and chopped out the samples I needed and here is the product:
I’m interested in any input, I’m a little ear blind to this now that I’ve been listening to it for some time.
It starts as deep, dark Dubstep and progresses to something more rowdy for the second drop.
If you’re interested the original can be found here:
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June 4, 2024 at 08:02 #9821
I do like the track’s theme John! The intro is really great. At 0:45 – 0:46 there’s a click sound, which isn’t intended I guess. The kick starting at 0:52 is a bit thin and sounding somewhat boxy. Actually I find the bass / lower frequency range could be beefed up a bit. That chopped vocal around 2:50 is so good. That scratchy sound section around the 3 minute mark is too far away to my eares, compared to the very present stereo field elements. I do also think the genre important snare / clap could cut through the mix a bit more (maybe just a bit more sidechaining and / or NY compression). Hope that helps:)
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June 5, 2024 at 21:19 #10044
LMAO, ok so I go into this thinking: “hmmm, maybe I should add some saturation or something to make the kick punchier”. In the end it turned out what I really needed to do was remove the low cut EQ.
Oof.
Hahaha, new version coming soon!
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June 4, 2024 at 10:01 #9822
P.S. Been so out of productive mode lately but for some reason this would be cool to remix if you don’t mind? 😁🤘
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June 4, 2024 at 17:16 #9826
Thanks Michael! Yeah the click I realized came with part of the atmospheric sounds I copied from the movie so it should be easy to cut.
I’ll definitely take a look at the low end/kic and snare. I’ll get another revision done asap.
I’d love to send you the stems for a remix once this is done!
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June 6, 2024 at 12:05 #10049
Hey John Liking this nice bass movements i get about the Kick maybe needs to hit thru in the mix a bit more but overall i like the theme of this track the vocals are cool they fit well nice work..T
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June 7, 2024 at 21:55 #10068
Thanks Tim! I should have a new version up tonight.
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June 8, 2024 at 07:05 #10070
Ok here is the new version:
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June 8, 2024 at 17:09 #10074
Small change made as I found a spot with some phase issues with a new bass sound.
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June 9, 2024 at 21:27 #10082
Didn’t catch the first versions, but this sounds good to me John. Vocal samples work relly well and the build up at 2:30 ish is awesome. Would like it a bit longer personally, but it totally work at this length also. Nice one!
+1 on the remix stems if they’re going too.
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June 10, 2024 at 02:20 #10083
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June 11, 2024 at 08:21 #10116
Mate, this is a super update! Yeah it could be a touch longer, but then you would need to implement something new / unique sounding as well to give it that special flavor but this track is already awesome! Well done 👍
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June 21, 2024 at 14:57 #10230
Hey John Nice track the vocals are great i like the bass lines the pitching at 1.00 is cool this version sounding much better are you sending out stems count me in if you are haha!!
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