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Temple01 posted in the group WTMO-Track Feedback
Temple01 Remix of AFL All Three Beggers
Hi all this is the first export its not quite right at this stage i need to sort the Kick out a bit as there is a throw off in the first part and also i prob loose the snare build in the break-drop and need to re do the levels and mixing but i wanted to post as i been playing with this track a while after John Kindly sent me the stems i really liked his version tho i have to admit having played with this so much past months i have forgotten his original haha!! anyhow any thoughts ideas are welcome and i thankyou for listening and comments..T
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Thanks Piv that helps yeah there is 1 small misplaced kik haha its probably not even noticeable it just needs nudge by a 16th
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Sounds really good Tim, like the stuttery orchestral vox that come in at 1:50ish. Only quibble for me is the arrangement at the start, the beats come in at 0:20 then you go into a breakdown at 0:40, would like to hear more beats once theyve started, so maybe put the breakdown at the start before the beats come in.
Side note, I also appear to have these stems on my drive, should probably do something with them. Sorry John, will get to it
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Thanks Ben you mean maybe have a long intro no beats upto 0.40 and remove the 0.20 kick drum etc ? Yeah I will try this thanks be good to hear a Remix from u too buddy
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hey guys this is V4 i changed the intro as Ben suggested which i think sounds much better, add a few small fx to the good/evil vocal in places for variation, i removed the snare roll but kept the kick roll into the drop, i changed the reese bass sound for a more gritty feeling reese and did some sound work and added some thermal vst for a bit of bite i also added in a new bass with this that comes in alternating bursts for some added movement in this part its subtle but it makes a nice add to this bass see what you think
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Nice one man, just listening now.
– I like the longer intro on this one, and the extra vox effects are great.
– Love the use of the OG bassline right before the drop, that’s awesome.
– your bassline is sick for sure too, nice addition with the other one periodically
– glitchy beat is great and the addition of the amen is perfect
– great switch up at the second drop. One note, one bassline sounds much more present than the other so might need to adjust them slightly to match a bit more? I picture some big 808 hits or something when the initial bassline cuts out.
– fuck me the bassline at 3:40 is so good.
– the ending of the bassline came kind of abruptly for me at 4:47 but that could be just me.over all I fucking love it and can’t wait to get this out with mine!
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Thanks John that great help I will check those bass level at the main drop too yeah maybe will try something at the end so the bass don’t cut to abruptly but happy u like it as I been playing about with it for some time 😀
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Even as it is I would say this is a fantastic tune so don’t change much. 😊
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So an Update on this track i added in some sub bass to support the basslines and give some feel factor i think Scott as right about the need for sub in this it’s just subtle but it makes a difference, also on the string parts in the break down and at the end i added a gating affect from Transit 2 which i updated today and thought would try it out i think it works well hope you enjoy… any comments are welcome thanks guys ..T https://soundcloud.com/temple01/afl-three-beggars-remix-v5-174/s-bDozzNO1PNO?si=b9a9e69b9c4a4addb5e513f7f9989dff&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
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Hey Tim, sounds great. My only comment would be maybe it could use a little more action in the sub bass. The drum programming is top notch! Lovely.
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Hi Scott thanks yeah maybe I need to add subtle sub in for the feel factor especially in the 1st half I will look at this thanks buddy 😊
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wowwww ok this is killer now. That extra sub is just what it needed. This is so good man!
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The new outro flows nicely too
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Thanks John yeah madd s nice difference 👌
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Really nice Remix, sound is also really really good. I wouldn’t mix it much, because it already sounds like you took care of most of that in production. dont know what is wrong with the kick?